We are looking for suggestions and proofing/editing skills.
For first time donors, we would like to send them a:
1. Cover letterNewDonorLetter
2. Brochure – about us New Donor BrochurePDF-2
3. Copy of most recent Newsletter
As you have time, please review these and feel free to suggest wording or edits, etc. We will discuss them the next time we meet. Thanks
Donor letter: first paragraph: paves way for a young person to know/realize..
Brochure: second page, What You’ve Done: last paragraph..youth’s versus youths’ not sure which punctuation is accurate?
Delete “we want to show them they’re worth loving” (we say it nicely in the Thank You area)